Friday, June 25, 2010

ACG - 1st Advance Manual Project #4: Now I Can Speak



Advance Manual : 226-A The Entertaining Speaker
Project # 4    : A Dramatic Talk
Title          : Now I Can Speak
Delivered at   : ToC Speechcraft Batch 3
Evaluated by   : CC/CL Laureano Ortega
Target Norm    : Advance Communicator Gold

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Note:
  • This is my second impromptu speech delivered at the 3rd Batch of Speechcraft of Toast of Comsofil
  • Personally, I do not suggest delivering impromptu advance speeches unless you have wide  experience to do so.  Note that this speaker has won several awards in Table Topics contest in club level, area level, division level, and was the 2nd place winner in the Quick Wit Marathon contest.
  • Below is the outline of the speech
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Introduction 
  • Ask a question "Have you ever been to a situation where you are loosing an argument simply because you don't know how to explain yourself"?
  • Salutation


Body 
  • This could happen between you and your boss, between two lovers, between two married couple 
  • For me: between me and my mother
  • Story of Jorge the silent
    • Tortured soul because he was forbidden to speak 
      • Uncles who are hyenas - snarls all the time
      • Aunties who are chimpanzees - talks all the time and never listen
      • Grandparents who insults his looks - he is different
    •  Non-supportive parents
      • Father who is a lion - never talk, just look with sharp eyes
      • Mother who is a broken record - talk the same thing all the time
    • Bullies in the neighborhood
      • Beaten because he is mis-understood
      • Teased because he cannot speak straight
      • Avoided and outcast because he think differently
    • Supportive sisters
      • Help clean his wounds
      • Play with him and talk with him
  •  Growing up 
    • Bullies in the school
      • Seatmate was cheating - I turned the other way
      • I was wrongly accused of cheating - I didn't squeal
      • I got a fail mark in my grades
    • Crushes
      • Rejected - I cannot say a word
  • If only
    • I could express myself - I would be understood
    • I could explain what happened - I will never have a fail grade
    • I was brave enough so say what I feel - I may have a love life
  • The will to learn to speak
    • Starts from college
      • Right after I put to shame by my instructor
      • Join civic/community organization to learn to interact with people
    • Embrace teaching
      • Made a lot of mistake - grammar and sentence
      • Didn't surrender
    • My journey with Toastmasters
      • Icebreaker to advance manuals - ACS
      • Leadership training

Closing
  • My new self
    • I am still "shy" - relatively
    • I gain confidence
    • Now, I can talk - talk about myself, talk about the world, and what is inside my mind

Friday, June 11, 2010

ACG - 1st Advance Manual Project #3: Ah, Um, but, and more



Advance Manual : 226-A The Entertaining Speaker
Project # 3    : Make them Laugh
Title          : Ah, Um, but, and more
Delivered at   : Filcom-It Speechcraft Batch 1
Evaluated by   : ACG/CL Ramon Austria
Target Norm    : Advance Communicator Gold

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Note:
  • This is another impromptu speech delivered for the 1st Batch of Speechcraft of Filcom-IT
  • This batch would eventually become members of the Filcom-IT Toastmasters Club
  • Personally, I do not suggest delivering impromptu advance speeches unless you have wide  experience to do so.  Note that this speaker has won several awards in Table Topics contest in club level, area level, division level, and was the 2nd place winner in the Quick Wit Marathon contest.
  • Below is the close approximation on the outline of the speech
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Introduction 
  • Ask a question "Do you why someone ring the bell during a speechcraft meeting"?
  • Explain the mechanics of crutch words: Ah, Um, Err, and long pause
  • Salutation


Body 
  • Share a story of 2009 World Champion of Public Speaking - Vikas Jingran
    •  Did not make it overnight
    • Regional accent, uh, ahm, err, and very long pause
  • My predicaments
    • Command of the English language
      • I didn't learn to read until high school
      • I didn't learn to write until college
      • I didn't learn to speak in public until lately
    • College experience
      • Ah... and lots of ah - made me insecure
      • Hmmm... and long pauses - grasping for words because of limited vocabulary
      • Failed thesis defense
        • I presented my thesis in Visayan dialect
        • Humbling evaluation of Professor Jeremy Pinson
  • The drive to learn to speak in public
    • Volunteer in civic and community services
    • Teaching
      • Kinder teaching assistant
      • College instructor
    • Further studies
      • MBA 
      • Ph.D
  • My love at first sight with Toastmasters
    • My fearful experience with my Icebreaker speech
    • The helpful members
    • The confidence that I learn and gain
    • The new me
      • still have some ahh, umm, err.. but minimal
      • strives to improve with practice

Closing
  • Toastmasters is designed for all those who want to learn and improve
    • Not all TM are good speakers, 
    • In fact, there are more non speakers
    • This is the place to learn
  • Invite the speechcraft participants to visit toastmasters meetings